Construction - 6 (Evaluation of Peer Feedback)

Changes 29 seconds - fade through black from news report to the titles. cut the length of the titles down - too long. 53 seconds - cut the first part of the shot, the pan is jerky. add some reaction shots. Atmosphere noise isn't needed in the soundtrack - too overdone 1 min 16 secs - continuity error with Charlotte and her phone. Add a clock in before and after to show the passing of time and break shots up, too long. 1 min 50 secs - start of shot is jerky, cut out jerks. A bit too long - shorten it down. 2 min 9 secs - pause as Charlotte opens the fridge - Cut it out. Change the soundtrack, make it sound more romantic so we can't guess what's about to happen, add spine chilling 'stingers' every time Gregg appears. Shorten the scene where Gregg appears behind the tree. Cut scene of Charlotte and dog going into the woods. When Charlotte gets killed add camera noise as she takes pic of werewolf. News titles on each news report Add ident at the start of film. Good Idea's good framing in the woods Nice camera sounds when Charlotte is taking pics of casper Flicker shots of Charlotte looking around the woods Nice green screen